NaPoWriMo2024 Day Two

ARHuelsenbeck
2 min readApr 2, 2024

I’ve already missed one day of National Poetry Writing Month. Oh well.

Today’s prompt is to write a platonic love poem.

Well, on my side, it was platonic.

Oliver
by ARHuelsenbeck


when you asked me out
I accepted immediately
I'd read your poems
in the school literary journal
I knew you'd be interesting
but I didn't expect you
to fall in love with me
I thought we were just
getting to know each other
but you were making plans
for our future
I admired your creativity
I wanted to talk about literature
you wanted a girlfriend
you professed your love
I didn't respond the way you hoped
you wanted a commitment
I wanted my freedom
I continued to see other people
I began turning you down
but I'm no good at letting people down
gently
you asked to see me
one last time
afterward you would never call me again
over dinner you handed me an epic poem
four pages of your meticulous tiny handwriting
the pressure of the evening made it difficult to breathe
much less to read
I tried, I really did
but I couldn't make sense
of the words
finally, I just said
it's beautiful
your mouth dropped open
you stared at me
incredulous
you drove me home
with tears running down your cheeks
weeks later
I found the poem in my purse
and read it without the pressure of your watchful eyes
the anguish of your broken heart
the despair of your lost dreams
the torment of your longing
it was all there
and I had told you it was beautiful

About Andrea R Huelsenbeck

Andrea R Huelsenbeck is a wife, a mother, a grandmother, and a former elementary general music teacher. A freelance writer in the 1990s, her nonfiction articles and book reviews appeared in Raising Arizona Kids, Christian Library Journal, and other publications. She is currently working on a middle grades novel and a poetry collection.

Originally published at http://arhtisticlicense.com on April 2, 2024.

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ARHuelsenbeck

Former elementary general music teacher. Wife, mother of 5, grandma of 3. Blogging about the arts and the creative process at https://ARHtisticLicense.com.